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hasty pine needles
fall like piercing rain upon
cold, taut, open skin
I don't necessarily do many haiku's. This is actually one of my first real attempts at the style.

Feedback would be great.
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xlntwtch's avatar
:iconcongratssignplz: ..on your DLD. This is everything said about on the DLD page. Not to be dismissed lightly.
Thank you. :+fav: